“ Everything composed made a lot of sense. But, think about this,
what if you wrote a catchier post title? I ain't saying your content is not good,
but what if you added something that makes people want more?
I mean BIZCOCHO DE HARINA DE AVENA is a little vanilla.
You ought to glance at Yahoo's front page and note how they create news titles to
get viewers interested. You might try adding
a video or a picture or two to grab people interested
about what you've written. Just my opinion, it could bring your website
a little bit more interesting. ”