“ I think that everything said was very logical.
But, consider this, what if you added a little information? I am not suggesting your information isn't solid., however suppose you added a title to
maybe grab a person's attention? I mean BIZCOCHO DE HARINA DE AVENA
is a little plain. You should look at Yahoo's home page and see how they create news headlines to get viewers to click.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to grab readers interested about
everything've got to say. In my opinion, it would make your posts a little livelier. ”